I was sitting in my lounge with my Mum, Dad and brother. We turned the TV on Dad said “Quickly the moon landings gonna happen!” I quickly turned the staticy TV on. The immense pressure was building up to wait for the channel to change to the moon landing. We finally got the channel. “It’s too late for popcorn” I said to my brother.
It feels like time is frozen People are bellowing words all around the neighborhood “ They made history!” My hands are full of sweat and disbelief “ they went to the moon” yelled my brother. “Ya think” I muttered to my brother.
There were parties all night because of the moon landing. News reporters were going mad about it. In the morning I went to school with my brother people were talking about the moon landing left right and center. Some people even thought, it was fake...
The past week, we have been writing our Apollo 11 moment in time. I was the person watching the Apollo 11 moon landing.
The hardest part of writing this story was getting the right setting and getting the words into the right day and age.
The easy part was writing the adjectives.
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