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Friday, 15 June 2018

The Big Kindom


One windy dark day a cowboy stepped into another dimension with a huge abandoned castle

towering the clouds. A black feathered raven scouting around the huge abandoned castle. The

man stepped inside the creaky mysteries castle. With droplets of water coming down. Then

suddenly a storm risen above! It got winder and his cape fluttering in the cold wind, shadows

everywhere making it pitch black. But then the raven flew down like a bomb and landed gently

in the cowboys hands it felt fluffy but nothing put a smile on his face. Then the storm went

away everything was bright again except for the...abboned castle. Then red flowers covered

the field in a blink of an eye but then the raven disappeared...

Blurb: in reading we learnt to do wow words. It was fun learning new wow words. Some of the words I dident even know.

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