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Thursday, 13 June 2019

But, Im still Thrilled

  But, i'm still thrilled
I was walking down the road when I saw a toad he looked cold and picked his nose I gave him a loose rose near a hose.
I gave a rose to a sad toad who picked his nose, but i’m still thrilled!
I saw a poor fox that lived in a box I gave him a scarf with a small bath
I gave a cold sad toad, who picked his nose a loose rose, I gave a scarf and a small bath to a fox who lived in a box
But, i’m still thrilled!
I looked over at a small ant who had no pants I gave him pants so he wouldn't rant.
I gave a rose to a cold toad who picked his nose, I saw a fox in a box I gave him a scarf and a small bath, I gave an ant some pants so he wouldn't rant
But, i’m still thrilled!
I saw a cat how needed a fancy hat to surprise the rat, I saw a hat shop so I gave it to the cat who’s gonna kill the rat.
I gave a cold sad toad who picked his nose a loose rose, I gave a scarf and a small bath to a fox who lived in a box
I saw an ant who needed pants so he wouldn't rant,
I gave a cat a fancy hat so he could surprise the rat
But I’m still thrilled!
The cat, the toad the fox the ant the cat came back to give me a pat on the back
But, i'm still thrilled!
I went to the shop to get more clothes, but the toad who picked his nose said “it’s alright said the toad heres this loose rose”
Thanks the man said in a flattered voice “why thank you toad” No problem Bottmeley Tomplems

The past few days we have been doing repetition in story's with rhymes mixed in.
The hardest part was thinking of the rhmes that make sense and the rhyme with the words that i'm rhyming with.
The easy part was the repetition you make the rhyming words and then you add a wee bit more to the story each time.

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